A Beautiful Evening Sunset

The Sun shined orange

The water was glistening

The water was still

The trees were swaying

And the birds were singing songs

Utterly sublime

2 thoughts on “A Beautiful Evening Sunset”

  1. This poem is very unique and I loved the way you phrased each line. The adjectives you used also enhanced the poem and took the meaning to a new level. Well done!

  2. You defined each aspect of a sunset perfectly. I like how you included various motions and references to the environment around the sunset as well. Your poem developed vivid imagery in my mind and your words carried a nice flow.

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