The Sun shined orange
The water was glistening
The water was still
The trees were swaying
And the birds were singing songs
Utterly sublime
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Mr. MacKnight's MYP5 English class.
The Sun shined orange
The water was glistening
The water was still
The trees were swaying
And the birds were singing songs
Utterly sublime
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This poem is very unique and I loved the way you phrased each line. The adjectives you used also enhanced the poem and took the meaning to a new level. Well done!
You defined each aspect of a sunset perfectly. I like how you included various motions and references to the environment around the sunset as well. Your poem developed vivid imagery in my mind and your words carried a nice flow.