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Hanli on My Personal Response: “They Shall Not Grow Old”: “I appreciate the way you organized your ideas, and I really like your ending sentence! I agree with what you…” Sep 25, 18:48
Hanli on They shall grow old (My personal response)- Amelie: “Amazing job, Amelie! I appreciate that you touched on the title of the movie – how they may not have…” Sep 25, 18:38
Sophie on A Beautiful Evening Sunset: “You defined each aspect of a sunset perfectly. I like how you included various motions and references to the environment…” Sep 25, 17:55
Sophie on My Future: “Thank you for sharing your passion and dream to become a doctor. This piece is quite relatable because I also…” Sep 25, 17:48
Meghan on A Beautiful Evening Sunset: “This poem is very unique and I loved the way you phrased each line. The adjectives you used also enhanced…” Sep 25, 17:35
Meghan on 𝒜𝓈 𝒯𝒽𝑒 𝒮𝑒𝒶𝓈𝑜𝓃𝓈 𝒢𝑜 𝐵𝓎 (𝒫𝒲 𝟣): “Tish, this poem is incredible! You have a way of making the reader hang onto everyone word that is written,…” Sep 25, 17:30
Meghan on PW #1 – Kate Homer-Dixon: “This writing piece is very creative and I enjoyed reading it very much. The descriptive language you used and concepts…” Sep 25, 17:24
Meghan on The Tale of the Hungry King-Liath: “This is a wonderful use of words and rhythm! I did not know what to expect as I read this…” Sep 25, 17:19
Meghan on PR – Inception: “I love the descriptive vocabulary you use throughout this piece of writing and how you annotate your thoughts. I also…” Sep 25, 17:15
Sophie on They shall not grow old: “I love the amount of detail you put into conveying different aspects of not only the movie but your experience…” Sep 25, 16:15
Sophie on PW #1 another blue day: “The raw emotion you convey in this writing piece leaves a sense of confusing relatability. The plot and emotion in…” Sep 25, 16:04
Sophie on PW#1 Decide: “This is such a relatable writing piece. I felt you really captivated the reader by introducing this question and message…” Sep 25, 15:54
Sophie on WWI personal response – Maria Prida: “I appreciate how you genuinely wrote this response with complete honesty and portrayed your personal perspective on the film. I…” Sep 25, 14:51
Sophie on The Tale of the Hungry King-Liath: “I have no idea how you come up with these storylines and phrases. You always include this aspect of humour…” Sep 25, 14:44
Sophie on PR: They Shall Not Grow Old: “I felt that you did an amazing job of producing a raw emotional response from the documentary, connecting it to…” Sep 25, 14:37
Sophie on PR – They Shall Not Grow Old: “I appreciated how you distinguished and compared the differences between the individual stories and impacts of each death, rather than…” Sep 25, 14:29
Sophie on 𝒜𝓈 𝒯𝒽𝑒 𝒮𝑒𝒶𝓈𝑜𝓃𝓈 𝒢𝑜 𝐵𝓎 (𝒫𝒲 𝟣): “Tish, I genuinely had to re-read this writing piece various times to capture the full extent of each detail and…” Sep 25, 14:21
Hanli on PW#1 – The Beauty of Nature: “Great work on this poem! I like the metaphor of the sun as a painter of the world, adding colour,…” Sep 25, 11:59
Hanli on Personal Response – Could I end the life of another individual?: “This is an excellent exploration, and I love the way that you tackled this question. It’s deep, interesting, and well-spoken,…” Sep 25, 11:55
Laura on PR: They Shall Not Grow Old: “I really appreciate the way you describe the movie with relation to fear. In the end of it all, war,…” Sep 25, 11:51
Hanli on PW #1 – Annoying Chickens: “I realize I didn’t really offer any advice in my last comment, so I’m making another so that it’s more…” Sep 25, 11:50
Laura on Personal Response – Could I end the life of another individual?: “Samantha this is an amazing take on the movie. I am truly in awe of this concept you have taken…” Sep 25, 11:47
Vittoria on Personal Response – Could I end the life of another individual?: “I like how you related your life with the documentary, it makes me think of a new perspective.” Sep 25, 11:44
Hanli on PW #1 – Kate Homer-Dixon: “I enjoyed your detailed description of the Dolphin War, and how the narrator is reflecting on its origins and questioning…” Sep 25, 11:44
Vittoria on PR – Inception: “I love the way you write, it kind of formal but in a way you understand it. I also relate…” Sep 25, 11:42