๐โ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก๐ฆ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐๐ ๐กโ๐ ๐ก๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐ ๐, ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก ๐๐๐๐ก๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐กโ๐๐๐ข๐โ ๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐ ๐. ๐โ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ข๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก ๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐ก ๐๐๐๐๐๐ง๐๐๐ ๐กโ๐๐ก ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐กโ๐๐ twelve ๐๐๐๐กโ๐ ๐๐๐ก๐๐, ๐กโ๐๐ฆ'๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐กโ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐. ๐โ๐ ๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐ โ๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐๐๐ข๐ ๐กโ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ข๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐, ๐ โ๐ ๐๐๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐ข๐๐ ๐ก๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฃ๐๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ข๐ ๐๐๐๐. Her nostrils filled with tโ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ก๐ฆ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ง๐๐ ๐๐๐๐โ, ๐ โ๐ ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ก๐๐ ๐กโ๐๐ก ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ค๐๐กโ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐กโ๐๐ก ๐๐๐๐ฆ ๐ค๐๐๐ก๐๐ ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ก๐๐ข๐๐๐ฆ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐โ. ๐ด๐ ๐กโ๐ ๐๐๐ก๐ก๐๐ ๐๐ ๐กโ๐ ๐๐๐ฆ๐ ๐ค๐๐๐ก ๐๐ฆ, โ๐๐ ๐๐๐ง๐ ๐ โ๐๐๐ก๐๐ ๐๐๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐กโ๐๐ ๐๐๐'๐ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ . ๐โ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ง๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ฆ ๐๐ ๐กโ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ข๐, ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ก๐๐๐ ๐กโ๐๐ก ๐๐๐ ๐ โ๐ ๐ค๐๐๐ก๐๐ ๐ก๐ ๐๐ ๐ค๐๐ ๐๐ข๐. ๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ก๐๐๐, โ๐ ๐๐๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐ข๐ ๐ก ๐๐๐๐ข๐, ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ค ๐ โ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ง๐๐ ๐กโ๐๐ก ๐กโ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐โ ๐ค๐๐กโ๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ค๐๐ ๐๐๐๐. ๐ท๐๐ ๐ก๐๐๐๐ก๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฃ๐๐ ๐ก๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก, ๐๐ก ๐ค๐๐ ๐ก๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐ก๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐-๐ ๐ข๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก. ๐โ๐ ๐๐ข๐๐๐๐ก ๐ ๐๐ข๐๐ ๐๐ ๐กโ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฃ๐๐ , ๐คโ๐ ๐ค๐๐ ๐ โ๐ ๐ก๐๐ฆ๐๐๐ ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฃ๐? ๐ผ๐ก ๐ค๐๐ ๐ก๐๐๐ ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ฃ๐, ๐กโ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐ข๐ ๐ก ๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐โ๐๐๐ฃ๐๐. ๐โ๐๐ก โ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ โ ๐๐๐โ๐ก๐๐๐๐, โ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ก๐ฆ. ๐๐ ๐๐กโ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ฃ๐๐๐ข๐๐ ๐ค๐๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐ โ๐ ๐ค๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ก๐ฆ. ๐ป๐๐ค ๐๐ข๐โ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ข๐๐ ๐ โ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐กโ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ก ๐๐๐ฃ๐? Would ๐ โ๐ ๐ค๐๐ข๐๐ ๐๐ฃ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ โ๐๐ ๐๐๐ก๐โ๐๐๐ ๐ก๐ข๐๐ก๐๐ ๐๐๐ฃ๐?
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Tish, I genuinely had to re-read this writing piece various times to capture the full extent of each detail and the depth you harnessed in each line. The poem itself conveys such poignant emotions and memories that I believe everyone can relate to in their own way. Each line creates vivid imagery in itself, yet, it comes together to create a captivating story as a whole. I especially admire how you referenced all senses to create a more connecting and imaginable relationship with the reader.
Tish, this poem is incredible! You have a way of making the reader hang onto everyone word that is written, and that is an amazing thing to achieve. I admire the concepts behind the poem and how real it is portrayed to the audience. My favourite line in the entirety of the poem is the last, which is, “Would she ever find her matching turtle dove,” because it is very impactful and leaves the reader pondering as to what the answer to that statement is and whether the author does, in fact, find her matching turtle dove.
I truly loved your poem, it’s amazing! The imagery is vivid, and the emotions are palpable.
I found that the metaphor of “the fragility of ice upon the top of my nose” captures the delicate and fleeting nature of emotions and moments in life; it’s a reminder that what once brought comfort and happiness can change and disappear with time. You did an incredible job writing this poem.