The thinks that I thought was surprising, Interesting and my ancestors who fought on both world wars. Surprised, because I always imagen that the trenches were more terrifying, but when I saw the trenches in color and the thought of the soldier, gave me the sense that it was livelier than I imagen. It was also very Interesting, how they thought of these “Horrific” thinks that they lived in, like ” being in the first line of trenches was fun.”. Last point is my ancestors. They came to my mind because there were also affected by the war like this British soldier. In conclusion, the movie was very good at brining me to think about those men who fought on wars.
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I can relate to this post beacuse I also had a diferent perception of war and after watching the documentary and being able to actually visualize it, my perception changed completely and I also noticed the way they referred to war with such ease.
I really liked your post because it’s very interesting how you talked about your ancestors and how you gave us a diferent point of view of the german army.
I like how you mentioned your ancestors had been in both world war which is really cool but there is a little grammar and spelling mistake there which might give people a different thought than what you wanted to tell your readers I love how you wrote it but if the grammar mistakes were fixed it would be perfect
I appreciate your perspective and how you shared your thoughts before and after. There were some spelling errors, but I overall enjoyed reading this.
I think your perceptive on the documentary was very unique when you were talking about how your felt when you realized your ancestors fought in both world wars. I think you could have gone into more depth by adding more details, but other than that I enjoyed reading your point of view.
Jan, great work. I love how you talked about your ancestors who fought in both world wars. I love how you wrote about when you watched the document and heard that “being in the first line of trenches was fun.” That phrase that you put is really amazing since I think not a lot of people catch that phrase while watching the documentary. Good job, Jan.
I loved how you mentioned that your ancestors fought in both wars. I enjoyed reading this.