Oliver’s IRJE #6

I was reading “The White Tower” when I found this paragraph

“The woods surrounding the small clearing were silent, as if nature was holding its breath. at least, that’s how it felt to Ty as he watched his bother raise his large ash bow and sight down the slender shaft” pg.20

I chose this quote because it sets up the seen and gives you an idea of what’s going on without needing to read to the rest of the paragraph.

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