IRJE #1

One day in spring, my parents, grandma and I prepared food and had a picnic together. When we got to the field, grandma laid out the blanket and put the food on it. After a while, grandma felt hot. While drinking herbal tea, she admired the dense grass, willow trees, and lush bamboo forests on the commanding hillside. My father and I were catching fish in the creek. Xiao Ming caught a big fish, and his father smiled and said to me, “You are awesome.” My mother was picking flowers from the flowers on the street. Mom wrapped the flowers in paper and sent grandma away. Grandma took the flowers and smelled them and said, “Thank you! These flowers are so fragrant.” Mom said, “You’re welcome.” In the evening, grandma packed up her things. Our family went home happily.One day we came to the door of the aquarium and saw a sea of ??people there, surging like flowing water. We walked into the museum and saw all kinds of fish swimming around in different fish ponds. Among these fish trade, the one that impressed me most was the platypus: it There is a big flat and long mouth, swimming back and forth in the water, hoping to be a water duck; there is also a kind of large yellow croaker, they have a long and thin tail, and the big bird body in the square is floating It’s so fun to be in the water, like a big quilt.

PW#1

My Avo has been sending me videos of her home in Manitoba, She lives in North Carolina and Portugal as well. Her houses are right on the ocean everywhere. Her favourite town is Carolina because of the easy weather. I plan to visit her in a few months. We have already bought the there tickets but not returning yet. She’s been teaching me Portuguese over text and we have been doing many calls over the past few months.

Hi, my name is Maria Blanco I´m from Mexico San Luis Potosi, my favorite color is blue and I’m too interest in marine animals and dinosaurs also I want to study marine biology and photography, I love videogames, The Legend of Zelda is my favorite. I like running and swimming, my favorite vacation is going to the beach and Disney. I have two older brothers and a little sister. I like watching movies and listen to music and I like to learn new thinks.

I like reading but I don’t usually do it, I would like to read more often because I know reading have a lot of benefits and there are many books that interest me like Stephen King books, Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, the tales of the brothers Grimm, Alice in Wonderland, etc. I would like to start reading in English, I like to read poems, I read a lot of Japanese Mangas and now I´m reading a book that calls “Rupture” that is in Spanish.

I’m not very good at grammar in English but I think that I just need to read more. I like to write about my day in a diary and write about the thinks that interest me like information of some music artist, animals, dinosaurs, etc. I would like to have the ability to understand, organize and express my feelings well enough to be able to write a good poem.

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Sample IRJE #2: “We was attacked!”

In William Golding’s Lord of the Flies, a group of English school boys are evacuated by plane from a war zone, but the plane crashes on a remote tropical island, and the only adult with them—the pilot—is killed. Soon after they meet, Ralph and Piggy argue about what happened to the pilot of their airplane, and we see right away that Piggy is more of a thinker than Ralph:

“He must have flown off after he dropped us. He couldn’t land here. Not in a place with wheels.” 

“We was attacked!” 

“He’ll be back all right.”

The fat boy shook his head.

“When we was coming down I looked through one of them windows. I saw the other part of the plane. There were flames coming out of it.” (p. 8)

Whereas Ralph unthinkingly believes that everything will work out for the best (“’He’ll be back all right’”), Piggy has kept his eyes open during the crash and is brave enough to speak the frightening truth: there are no adults left to take care of them.

Sample IRJE #1: “You reason like a block of cheese.”

In The Viscount of Bragelonne, by Alexander Dumas, the old soldier, d’Artagnan, proposes a business opportunity to Planchet, who was his squire in their younger days but who now owns a prosperous candy shop in Paris. D’Artagnan’s idea is to raise a small army and restore Charles II, rightful King of England, to his throne. Planchet is reluctant to invest without understanding more about d’Artagnan’s plans.

“Since you are proposing a business deal, I have the right to discuss it,” says Planchet.

“Discuss, Planchet; from discussion comes light.”

“Well then, since I have your permission, I would like to point out that in England they have, first of all, a Parliament.”

“Yes. And then?”

“And then, an Army.”

“Good. Anything else?”

“And then, the people themselves.”

“Is that all?”

“The people of England, who consented to the overthrow and execution of the late King, father of Charles II, will never agree to put the son back on the throne.”

“Planchet, my friend” said d’Artagnan, “you reason like a block of cheese.” (p. 417)

In French, the line is more beautiful: “Planchet, mon ami, tu raisonnes comme un fromage.” It made me laugh out loud the first time I read it, and it reminded me of something my French friend Christian said to me years ago when he noticed that I was wearing a new shirt: “Tu es beau comme un camion.” “You are as handsome as a truck.”