PW #1 – personal writing

My Trip to Alberta

About three weeks ago, I went to Alberta, and it was one of the best trips of my life. I stayed there for about four days, and it was super fun because I got to see my family. I hadn’t seen my cousins in a very long time, so it was really exciting.

On the first day, I arrived in Edmonton. We went to a couple of my family’s houses, and later, all of my cousins and I went out to eat. We ended up having pizza, which was really good. After we ate, we played video games for a bit. Later that evening, the whole family went for a drive to see downtown Edmonton. It was a cool experience. As soon as we got home, we went to bed because we had a big day planned for tomorrow.

The next day, we went to Banff, which is in Calgary. Banff is one of the most beautiful places in Canada. When I arrived, we went straight to the lake. The water was so beautiful—it had a green and bluish color that looked amazing. We stayed the night in Banff in a big house.

The next day was even more fun! We went to a place with another lake, a grassy field, and a playground. They also had spots where you could play sports like soccer and volleyball. We played for a long time and then made dinner on the barbecue. There were about 50 to 60 people there, and most of the kids were around my age. We all had a great time together.

That night, we went to my cousin’s house. We talked, played some board games, and planned what we were going to do for the next few days. For the rest of the trip, we mostly repeated the fun stuff we had already done—hanging out, playing games, exploring, and eating good food.

That’s how I would describe one of the funniest and most fun trips I’ve ever had in my entire life.


my introduction about myself

Hello I am Subhan. I will be telling you a bit about myself so you can get to know me better.

I was born in Victoria, B.C. I live in this city with my parents  with . My parents are from Afghanistan. At my house my family makes Afghan food, and every once in a while, I help them out with the food. I am very interested in  learning about my country traditions and why we have them.

Another thing about me is I really like playing sports. The main sport I play is soccer. It’s my favourite sport ever since I was a kid. I like the sport because to it brings happiness me and it always Britains my day  . I always try to play soccer, whether it is at school or even with my family at a park. I always try to play as much as possible. Whenever I play, I feel active it kind of wakes me up.

Besides soccer, I am starting to love cooking because anything can happen while cooking. I like helping my parents in the kitchen. It’s fun to make different types of food with different ingredients , and make something special which you may like or not.

This school year, I am looking forward to learning a lot of things and making friends while playing lots of sports.