PR# 2 “the story of Joseph”

The story of Joseph has made me see how dark and twisted the bible can be compared to what I though it was. Joseph has made me think about how you can forgive and preserver through hard times and still be able to look at the people who hurt you and say i forgive you. I haven’t really learned anything about myself while reading Joseph other than you can always find the good in someone even after they have done terrible thing to you

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Finn says:

November 24, 2025 at 11:33 am

I like how you covered talked about religeon and things, but I don’t think this reaches the word count and some things aren’t capitalized.

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Aiden says:

November 25, 2025 at 8:53 am

i like how you talk about the religion but the word count is a bit lacking

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