Clunk…

Clunk…

Clunk. You find a strange mangled looking wooden box on the beach. What would you like to see inside? For me, my foremost desire would be materialistic. I would hope to find gold coins and old rare treasures that hold tons of value. Perhaps a gold crown littered in rubies diamonds and sapphires. Anything worth an enormous amount of cost is a treasure in my eyes. However, there are some things that I would like that are not materialistic. I want the answer to what it takes to be successful in life. I want the instruction to lead a perfect life without mistakes. The reasoning? The reasoning is because, without failure, outcomes efficiency. I want to accomplish and do many things in my life, and if I am stuck at one thing, or if I trip and fall, I lose precious time. And time is limited in this world. I would also like to find the answer to long-distance space travel in a short time. Space travel, in my eyes, is the most adventurous thing to do. And travelling worlds, exploring and finding lifeforms would be the best type of adventure in my books.

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2 thoughts on “Clunk…”

  1. The language you use in this is very descriptive and imaginative, and I like the topic!! One thing I would suggest would be to break it up into smaller paragraphs, so it’s easier for the reader to keep focused.

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  2. hey, Eshaan
    I thought that your choice of words was very well done and helped with you explaining things. I personally Don’t see any problems with this. Good job!!

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