Animal farm, by George Orwell is about the dangers of  communism using animals as an example. Major, an old boar, has gathered all the pigs on the farm.Before his death he wanted to share his  wisdom with the other pigs, and translates them into visions and prophecies.

-“These comrades, is the answer to all our problems. It is summer up in a single word – Man. Man is the only real enemy we have.”

-“The man is the only creature that consumes without producing.”

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I picked this quote because even though it is in the beginning of the book in my eyes it is one of the most aesthetic moments.  I really enjoyed  the truth behind these words. Why are we standing over pigs, chickens, and cows? What gives us the right to destroy their lives like we do.

 

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  1. Dominik, you have chosen a good passage and you have an interesting take on it, but you have committed far too many writing errors. It’s no good having worthy ideas if your writing is so filled with errors that they distract from your ideas, or confuse them. Check Errors 56, 9, 10, 47, and proofread for proper punctuation. And give your post a title next time ;^).

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  2. Hi Dominik, after reading through your entry I noticed that there are some mistakes throughout your work I would advise you to re-read your writing to correct the errors. One thing I noticed, I might be wrong, is that in your first quotation you wrote: “It is summer up in a single word…” I believe that the words “summer up” should written as summed up.

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  3. Hi Dominik, after reading your entry I noticed that there are some mistakes throughout your work I would advise you to re-read your writing to correct the errors. When you are writing a sentence and you end it, you should add a space after your period and then begin your next sentence. You wrote: “For example Major, an old boar, has gathered all the pigs on the farm.Before…” You ended the sentence here but forgot to add a space after the ending period. Also, you should have put a comma at the end of: “For example.” Another thing I noticed, I might be wrong, is that in your first quotation you wrote: “It is summer up in a single word…” I believe that the words “summer up” should written as summed up.

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  4. Hey Dominik. I really liked your passage and the quote that you choose. It will be better if you give more detail in the introduction, as well as leaving a little part of the book, and some detail in the conclusion. Leaving all that behind, nicely done!

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